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When singular, I think we need to use ‘the’: ‘Ship’ → ‘The ship’.
Also, I’m unsure about ‘he is garrisoned in’, specially because of the ‘in’ at the end. What would you think about ‘where he is garrisoned’?
Finally, specially to make sentences like this one more readable, what would you think about adding a ‘get(s)’ to the structure? So, from the current “[player] [class] [change] [attributes]” to “[player] [class] get(s) [change] [attributes]”.
Altogether, the result here would be “The ship where he is garrisoned gets −30% batch training time and +50% movement speed.”.